I enjoyed the paper because it was very personal and heartfelt, however I think your title "How to avoid a meaningless life" doesn't fit with your paper, your essay, you list ways that long-boarding helps improve your life, which is something more personal to you. I'd like to see how you can apply the ideas you had in your paper to everyone since not everyone long-boards, and extend those ideas to the masses
Thursday, June 11, 2009
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What stood out to me in your essay is how something as simple as longboarding can be life-changing. It’s not just a hobby; it’s your peace. I feel that. I’ve been thinking lately about how overwhelmed I am with online school. Sometimes I wish I could just pay someone to take my online class so I could have time for my peace, too. You’ve inspired me to rethink how I spend my time. Great read.
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